Film Blagger_magazine Film Review Page
First draft feedback.
People thought the initial review was good, however some slight changes could be made.
- The top title could use some movement as it overlaps the border too much.
- There is no title to state what film is being reviewed.
- And the first letter of the text is normally bold and outstanding.
This is the final draft of my magazine review and as you can see i've corrected the little errors and added some new elements, which now bulk up my magazine review. I went for a quirky look and is much more informal than most magazines. Taking inspiration from Kerrang! FHM and EMPIRE magazine I have developed and created my own review of my groups film, Passion of a bleeding rose. It contains a star rating (In mine, a 'blag' rating), the actual review, snippets of un-required information ( In mine, Troll facts) and several images with captions alongside many other conventional properties of a magazine.
Here are some example reviews of films that inspired my creation.
